Changes Update!

[tabaqui]

Yay!
Changes has been updated, and you can find the new chapter at my website.
Thanks, everybody, for the kind words!
And a HUGE thank you to Edi for doing the worlds fastest beta!
*hugs*!!

Changes Chapter 9: Song

Comments

[mousehounde.livejournal.com]

Lovely new chapter. I really enjoyed how you worked the canon to include Ethan and Oz. I rather liked that Ethan was the one who called Sweet. It seems like something he would do while bored. I kinda thought it skipped ahead a bit. One moment everyone was heading to the Bronze to confront Sweet, then it was all over. I admit, I really wanted to see Willow suffer when she found out she pulled Buffy from Heaven, so it might just be me. But it seemed that there was a missing section there. It was neat the way you got Spike into the suit. I can see him doing that for Dawn. It was *really* nifty that you thought about having Oz in wolf form because the forget spell made him forget his human part. That was a nice touch.

I had read the update at your website before I saw your update here at your LJ. The link onsite to chapter 9: Song links back to chapter 8.

Thank you for a wonderful update.

[tabaqui]

Hey, thanks!
I appreciate that.
And thanks so much for the heads-up on the problem at the website! Fixed now. :)
Sheesh.

As for the 'Sweet' part, yeah, i skipped the confrontation there and all - skipped ahead to Spike, Xander, Oz and Derio at home kind of going over what happened in a minimal kind of way. I didn't want to go into the gory details on that, and the 'betrayal' of the memory spell was so much more...hurtful, to me, than the other, so...
Sorry if you got a little confused!
:)