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Saturday, September 25th, 2004 11:14 pm
Hallo, flist.
:)
The newest chapter is up.
Have at it!


Chapter 20: Games


Edited to say -
I would dearly love a 'Changes' Icon.
Dearly.
Sunday, September 26th, 2004 04:36 am (UTC)
Yea! Wonderful! Hate that The First still got to Spike, but this was better...

Fix the forgetting. Please?
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Sunday, September 26th, 2004 04:43 am (UTC)
(Julia, here)

Oh, scary, and sad, and Wood and Angel being complete gits... great rushing about, terror and confusion... and the right nerd ending up dead!

You're doing such a great job shadowing Buffy season 7, without falling into the traps of telling instead of showing.




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Sunday, September 26th, 2004 05:08 am (UTC)
Oh! I liked Andrew, I'm sorry to see him gone--but I love Jonathan, so you saved him yay! Please be kind to him!

Great great ep, of course, you're just swingin now, girl! And Principal Wood! I know a lot of folks hate him because of Spike but come on! How can you not like Wood? Mr. Smooov...
you're scaring me to death with Spike and I know it's going to get worse, and you have the nerve to say I'm evol? Ha!
Sunday, September 26th, 2004 05:15 am (UTC)
Yet another great installment! I'm so scared for Spike and the pack, I can't help it. And Xander's last line there is kinda scary. You know, a be careful what you wish for type of thing...

Luv it! Luvs you!
Sunday, September 26th, 2004 05:24 am (UTC)
What - you - Aaaaarghhh!!

I knew it, but I still can't believe it. and the First. Wood and Angel are gits. And the confusion - with the forgetting. It's just gonna get worse I know it. But Spike will be fixed ... after more PAIN and suffering and...

I hate you!
*pouts*
But I kinda love you, too
*sheepish grin*
Sunday, September 26th, 2004 05:24 am (UTC)
Pardon me, but dayum gurrrl.

Okay, but seriously. Wow, and *sniffle* and with the, and the... *sigh* Gonna go and huddle in the corner now...
Sunday, September 26th, 2004 05:32 am (UTC)
I would dearly love a 'Changes' Icon.

Describe what you want. I'm in an icon making mood baybee.

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Sunday, September 26th, 2004 05:46 am (UTC)
Yes, one of my favorites updated - and boy do you make it hard to choose with all your great fiction.

Cindy Lee
Sunday, September 26th, 2004 06:55 am (UTC)
Aww, Andrew! I grew to like Andrew. Ah, well, not my story ...

Loved the image of Xander in full hyena mode flanked by two wolves. And Buffy *finally* having the intelligence to just go with the weird.

I'm afraid I'm in the "Wood is a git" camp. I understand the revenge thing, but he suffers from the Hamlet fault of delaying his revenge without Hamlet's excuse of not being sure the Ghost who told him of the crime was good or evil.

Still hoping for some sort of Angel-Spike reconciliation.

I'm trying to think of who Xander might ask for help. Jack doesn't owe him anything, but Xander might think of asking for a favor. And favors from the fey don't always work the way you want.

Hmmm...

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Sunday, September 26th, 2004 07:55 am (UTC)
Please tell me that you don't follow along with everything that happened in season 7 in this fic. I don't want Spike to die *sobs* or Xan to lose an eye *sobs some more*.

Speaking of Spike...poor broken puddin' pie. He should be fixed.

Angel is an ass. Poor An-DREW. Still don't like Wood, the bastard.

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Sunday, September 26th, 2004 08:51 am (UTC)
This was exciting, heartrending and terrifying all in the same breathe, I virtually held my breathe all the way through!

"You killed him, Spike!" right at that moment I had the urge to smack Angel really hard the pillock. Liked the fact that Buffy just dealt and didn't have a hissy fit. Look forward to seeing how you deal with Wood.

You captured the sheer terror and confusion that is Spikes mind wonderfully well it literally radiated off the page.

Great chapter as usual.

*smoochies*


Sunday, September 26th, 2004 11:42 am (UTC)
ooh! heartbreaking and sweet and so scary how the first can manipulate the bond like that!
BTW, something I thought about after the last chapter, with you bringing the boys back into Sunnydale for the battle with the first. Xander's still gonna lose his eye, isn't he? I was remembering the last season, and Caleb's comment to Xander about him being the one who sees things makes way more sense in Changes!verse than it did in cannon.
You don't have to answer, I'll just be prepared to cry. : )
Sunday, September 26th, 2004 01:45 pm (UTC)
Oh, no! Spike torture!

You are evil ans soooo good. This is great and this story just gets better and better.
Sunday, September 26th, 2004 02:50 pm (UTC)
Just finished reading your latest update. I love this story and I'm amazed that, even after all these chapters, the quality of your writing never slips. I just want it all to work out for the characters, especially the pack but I get the feeling that the nasties are gonna keep coming for a wee while yet. Please make Spike stop forgetting soon, though - I feel so bad for him and Xander. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks.
Sunday, September 26th, 2004 05:45 pm (UTC)
Hellspawn and Hellspouse gone for the afternoon. Cup of tea and a new chapter of Changes.

Does it get any better than this?

*leisurely clicks button to begin reading*
Sunday, September 26th, 2004 09:27 pm (UTC)
Oh what a wonderful thing to come home to after such a crappy day at work. :o)

The mental image of a green-eyed predatorial Xander flanked by two wolves is delightful.

Angel needs to get his priorities right and stop all that leaping to conclusion. he needs to stop chewing his toes too. The broody one has terminal foot in mouth disease. *g*

You killed Andrew! I really wasn't expecting that. But Jonathan did deserve more than the ignominious ending he got in canon. Poor sod.

And Xander's plea for help there at the end? My mind went straight to Jack and that cryptic comment he made to Spike after he fused the chip. ::is scairt:: *g*

Damn fine chapter!

Now, about this icon and your lack of a Derio. I am in one of my helpful moods today (gawd help everyone) so I googled 'dreadlocks'.

There are some scary people out there, but I found someone who could be Derio... here.

Let me know if you want me to try and iconise him with the other three. ;o)

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Monday, September 27th, 2004 01:19 am (UTC)
Beautiful images of Xander and the two wolves on the chase (I had to go back and read that several times); loved how comforting Xander was to Spike; loved Buffy in this chapter. I still have hopes that you'll find something to like about Angel someday. My poor Angel, you don't come off at all well in this story!

Monday, September 27th, 2004 04:34 pm (UTC)
I started this yesterday, but I was in such a sad mood, I stopped after they got to the basement, in case anything bad happened. I started again today, and it was sad and dark, but not too much for me to handle. I know I harp on this all the time, but I still love that it's Dawn and Tara that are "pack." Poor Spike...I really felt his fear that he would have turned Xander. I'm still sad today, I'd give better fb otherwise.
And how hot is your new icon?!
Tuesday, September 28th, 2004 07:44 pm (UTC)
Lovelovevlove the Pack! and I like seeing them all united to fight the First. Not to sound greedy but it's too long to wait until Sunday. More Now!
*stomps foot*