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Wednesday, May 21st, 2008 11:22 pm
*waves tiredly*
See that icon? That is *so* me. But, i've work yet to do. The last couple days have been hardcore cleaning and packing and moving. Forty minute drive each way, unloading, more cleaning... Today was more of the same with added DSL and Cable-guy antics, which took much longer than anticipated.

Tomorrow - the great move-in, in which our beds and toiletries go to the new house! Wheeeeee! And computers, too. :)

So, i haven't been around, won't be for a couple more days, just lurking but man, so busy.
And so, so tired. Did i mention i was tired?
*yawn*

Anyway - back to getting my desk/computer ready to be loaded up in the morning.

I leave you with a teeny coda to 'The Song of the Treadmill'. [livejournal.com profile] marciaelena wanted to know what it was like when Dean killed the demon. This probably isn't enough to suit, but i hope it still satisfies!

*yawns more*
Okay, this is me, signing out.




In his dreams, the sword is weightless. A shaft of pure light, that hurts to look at. In his dreams, Sam's blood is hot and vital on his tongue, setting him alight – sending seething flame all through his body for just a moment.

In his dreams, he steps across the ward and he can feel it. It's like stepping through a wave at the sea – like walking out of calm into a strong wind, and he falters for a moment. The demon towers over him, and its body is at once a pillar of flame and a twisted rope of raw flesh and blood – bone and maggots and the sheen of sunlight on water. He can't sort it into one or the other, and doesn't want to.

It whispers at him, mocking – curls around him like a snake, making his skin shiver. In his dreams, he's not afraid.

He lifts the sword and brings it down, flashing arc, and the demon screams. Where the sword has cleaved it, it bleeds. Muddied light, like a shoal of tarnished silver fish, fans out from it, dissolving. It ravels apart like a poorly made scarf, essence unspooling into the ether until it sputters into nothing. Gone, just like that, and he grins.

Turns to Sam, to *stranger, brother, lover, other, family* and lifts the sword in half-mocking, half-serious salute.

'Sammy, man, you gotta get you one of these.'

In his dreams, Sam grins back – steps out of the invisible pulse of the ward and yanks him close by a fistful of leather and scarf. 'I think one's plenty, don't you?'

In his dreams, Sam's mouth is cold and chapped and tastes of salt, and coffee, and mint. In his dreams, it takes his breath away – makes heat curl in his belly, makes his heart pound.


In real life, it's ten times better.



Treadmill timestamp.

*super-sekrit missage to Snow...*clings*...
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Thursday, May 22nd, 2008 04:51 am (UTC)
Eeek Tab, so lovely. Yay coda ♥

And moving is such a bitch, I feel for you bb. It'll all settle down soon though and you'll get to enjoy new house!
Thursday, May 22nd, 2008 04:57 am (UTC)
It's nearly all over now. Hang in there, it all gets better from here.
Thursday, May 22nd, 2008 05:11 am (UTC)
I think [livejournal.com profile] marciaelena is going to love it. It's pretty darn fantastic.
Thursday, May 22nd, 2008 05:33 am (UTC)
Exhausted and still she kills. You're the best!

*pets you with the mitt-tuns of sustaining love--or maybe you just want some chocolate?*
Thursday, May 22nd, 2008 06:13 am (UTC)
The whole thing is beautiful in some pretty creepy ways, but that last line? Lovely.
Thursday, May 22nd, 2008 07:24 am (UTC)
yay coda!

congrats on seriously moving in, no wonder you're tired!
Thursday, May 22nd, 2008 09:43 am (UTC)
*clings back tighter*

miss you!!

and my, that was gooood, baby. Thank you.

*hugshugshugshugs*
Thursday, May 22nd, 2008 12:09 pm (UTC)
Oh that was awesome. Love that last line.

I hope you have a bathtub with lots of bubbles waiting for you once the move is over :)
Thursday, May 22nd, 2008 12:23 pm (UTC)
Moving is *exhausting*! But what a great day when you finally get it done. Have fun putting everything in the exact perfect spot where it belongs, and once again congratulations on the beautiful new house.
Thursday, May 22nd, 2008 12:41 pm (UTC)
Oh man. You have *no* idea how happy you just made me. This is so incredibly gorgeous I don't have words. Not enough? It's everything I wanted and more.

You're brilliant even when you're tired. ::loves::


I hope the rest of the move goes well! And take a day just to relax and rest after, if you can.
Edited 2008-05-22 12:43 pm (UTC)
Thursday, May 22nd, 2008 12:58 pm (UTC)
Good luck on the move in!!!
Thursday, May 22nd, 2008 07:13 pm (UTC)
Muddied light, like a shoal of tarnished silver fish, fans out from it, dissolving.

Oooh, beautiful imagery! Preeeeety! :D
Thursday, May 22nd, 2008 09:08 pm (UTC)
The last line! *flails*
Thursday, May 22nd, 2008 09:48 pm (UTC)
Ack! Moving is exhausting. Take care of yourself.

And there's a coda? I haven't even finished it yet! Vacation is wonderful, but I lose track of stuff so easily...
Thursday, May 22nd, 2008 10:40 pm (UTC)
Aw, love that last line!

And good luck with the move. It's always such a pain but the unpacking and choosing what to do with everything can be kind of satisfying.
Thursday, May 22nd, 2008 10:40 pm (UTC)
Wow, you get more than a day to move?
When we moved from one to the other, all the contracts went through on the same day, so everyone had to move on the following day - it was blimmin' chaos I can tell you, what with the cats and the fish tanks ...

Hope everything goes smoothly for you!

Friday, May 23rd, 2008 03:00 pm (UTC)
EEP! So so awesome. LUVS
Tuesday, May 27th, 2008 09:50 pm (UTC)
Yay how cool was that? Pretty cool if you ask me. Thanks for the coda.
Wednesday, May 28th, 2008 12:04 pm (UTC)
oooh, that was lovely!
and, excuse me for a minute while I..
*does happy dance for Dean-joy x10*
Thank you! too much Dean angst these days, this was sooo needed.
Hope the move went great, and that you find everything after:)
and, umm- were you moving in the midst of storm warnings etc? *bites nails*
Can't remember if all that hit your area- it even hit ours! I think my cat was trying to crawl inside me at one point- can't imagine the state he'd have been in if we were moving at the same time!

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Thursday, May 29th, 2008 07:25 pm (UTC)
Again, your attention to detail make this vivid and electric. The demon is beautifully described. That last line is fantastic. Ten times better than all this glory? That is just awesome!

Thanks, again, for the wonderful read.
Monday, June 2nd, 2008 05:05 am (UTC)
Is the new house larger than the old one? Cooler? How's the school district? Has Monstrous made any friends? Are your neighbors okay? Please tell me you haven't carpeted those floors. . . .

New-house feel rocks, once you've finally got everything set up, but everything's still just unfamiliar enough to be exciting.
::bounces::

I stopped reading at "teeny coda to Song. . . .", so as not to be spoiled.

I'm like some kind of saint. Only pretteh :)
Tuesday, June 3rd, 2008 04:32 am (UTC)
Ah, lovely, lovely, lovely, as always.

And the scarf image--that's from the story, yes? I remember it! Excellent use of a motif!

The last line is just the best, but the imagery of the entire piece, the dream-like quality of it but also the way it meshes beautifully with Sam's witnessing of Dean's slaying of the demon--perfect!

Bravo!
Friday, June 6th, 2008 07:17 am (UTC)
Amazingly haunting coda to a truly moving story, Thank you
Sunday, June 8th, 2008 01:29 am (UTC)
The demon towers over him, and its body is at once a pillar of flame and a twisted rope of raw flesh and blood – bone and maggots and the sheen of sunlight on water. He can't sort it into one or the other, and doesn't want to.

Damn. That's--I want more description, yet I don't. It's creepy and fantastic and if this were bible-days, I'd so be turned into a pillar of salt for needing to see every bit of everything, even if the cost was my life.

Turns to Sam, to *stranger, brother, lover, other, family* and lifts the sword in half-mocking, half-serious salute.

'Sammy, man, you gotta get you one of these.'


THAT!

Is so Dean! So perfect!

In his dreams, Sam's mouth is cold and chapped and tastes of salt, and coffee, and mint. In his dreams, it takes his breath away – makes heat curl in his belly, makes his heart pound.

In real life, it's ten times better.


Oh . . . please write more in this 'verse. It's just so--everything.
Wednesday, June 11th, 2008 11:54 pm (UTC)
Wow, what can I say? I just had this story recced to me and read it straight through. It was awesome. I can't even start to tell you how awesome.

Amazing.

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