Well, I felt as though I didn't get to know the characters that well. Spike's motivations weren't clear to me, and his relationship with Xander felt murky. Honestly, it might have helped if I knew the Peter Pan story so as to have more of a context. What I liked about this chapter, though (even though I don't exactly understand it) is that it had an unexpected poignance. Spike was so gentle with Pan, as was Hook in the end. Maybe the best way to say this is that it's not my favorite of your stories. But since I love your writing, that's hardly a criticism (I hope!)
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