I didn't realize until I got to the end that I'd been holding my breath the whole time I was reading. This was intense. I'm so looking forward to re-reading the whole story again when it's done.
(ps: "Of course they're my boys! Their the lost boys...–" I think you meant "...'they're' the lost boys...")
oh boy
(ps: "Of course they're my boys! Their the lost boys...–" I think you meant "...'they're' the lost boys...")
So, great stuff.
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