trying to notice everything and catalogue it, separate the dangerous from the...oh! Right, the dangerous from the blowing grocery bag.
That is a perfect Dawn!moment right there. Really nicely done.
I think you have captured exactly that riot of emotions that comes with the loss or thinking about the loss of virginity. The sense of rebellion, of danger, of longing for that kind of closeness with someone else, the finally belonging to the "girls who've done IT" club *g*. But also the idealization of that moment. She's getting in over her head here and not with the sex, but the sex is masking that for her. Very nicely done.
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That is a perfect Dawn!moment right there. Really nicely done.
I think you have captured exactly that riot of emotions that comes with the loss or thinking about the loss of virginity. The sense of rebellion, of danger, of longing for that kind of closeness with someone else, the finally belonging to the "girls who've done IT" club *g*. But also the idealization of that moment. She's getting in over her head here and not with the sex, but the sex is masking that for her. Very nicely done.