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Sunday, June 20th, 2004 04:08 am (UTC)
I've read it three times now, and suddenly realized I'd been a bad, rude girl and hadn't commented. :)
For some reason, the part that really got me was Orli obsessively scrubbing the kitchen. Loved that. And all the little details, like her teeth and the job cleaning up roadkill. Makes it very complete and rounded. To sum up and quit babbling: very much liked.

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