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Thursday, December 8th, 2005 11:29 pm (UTC)
Li'l Brudda'? God, I love that one. And I love Tenderfoot.
Ferro checked his boards again - looked at the warning that always came up when the ship's gun was charged. A leak, somewhere - nothing bad yet. But the little warning was always there.

Wow. See, this story is so outlandish, total sci-fi craziness, but these little details really add to the texture of the piece, make it seem real.
But the story, she gets mucho interesting, and tense. I'm hooked!

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