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[identity profile] resounding-echo.livejournal.com
Sunday, March 18th, 2007 07:01 am (UTC)
Holy crap. I loved this. What an intriguing concept--and you executed it beautifully.

I love Ellen's POV. I love the extended canine metaphor; that image of pups in the junk yard at the end is especially powerful.

And the pool-chalk scene? Guh.

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