AAAAAAHH! *So* good! Geronimo - I laughed out loud, I can totally see/hear Spike yelling that. Spike and Angel's reunion - exactly how it would be, how they keep meeting years, decades apart, but the relationship's more-or-less the same, snarky comments (you just can't do subtle), perfect... And you've got the language just right, I think. Tight but not terse, appropriate jargon ("spinward") to set the scene but without being heavy-handed, and fantastic pacing. Loving it. Did I already say that??
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*So* good!
Geronimo - I laughed out loud, I can totally see/hear Spike yelling that.
Spike and Angel's reunion - exactly how it would be, how they keep meeting years, decades apart, but the relationship's more-or-less the same, snarky comments (you just can't do subtle), perfect...
And you've got the language just right, I think. Tight but not terse, appropriate jargon ("spinward") to set the scene but without being heavy-handed, and fantastic pacing.
Loving it. Did I already say that??