"We're gonna be here three days, Xander." Ferro pulled an old square of pale red cloth - a bandana once upon a time - out of his pocket and made to wrap it around Xander's hand. Xander recoiled.
"You are not putting that filthy rag around my hand!"
"It's not filthy!" Ferro examined the cloth. Well, it was a little...stiffish. "Cleaner then in there," he added, jerking his head in the direction of what Xander obscurely called the 'Jeffries tubes'.
Stiffish?
EWWWWW!!!!
ROTFLMAO!
And dude, Jeffries tubes. . . .
I knew there was a reason I liked you, other than the slash. You geek *hugs you*
He had a funny feeling about this deal and he wanted to be back topside, monitoring what was going on at the meeting. Spike's contact was a Chaddock and he didn't trust the slimy bastards.
I use that as an example of the AWESOME 'verse and backstory you've created. This whole thing is amazing--how do you do it? Who do you read in sci-fi? Williams? Gibson? And if you don't mind the comparison--this is how Firefly shoulda been. Complex-er, cooler and more kickass backstory stuff. They had the interesting characters and the beginnings of something good, but you've got those and everything else--right off the bat, as well.
Yes, I am hooked.
I want this to be a tv show right now--and a series of novels. And some graphic novels! YEAH!
This is perfect and you must write it forever or else *shakes fist at you*
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"You are not putting that filthy rag around my hand!"
"It's not filthy!" Ferro examined the cloth. Well, it was a little...stiffish. "Cleaner then in there," he added, jerking his head in the direction of what Xander obscurely called the 'Jeffries tubes'.
Stiffish?
EWWWWW!!!!
ROTFLMAO!
And dude, Jeffries tubes. . . .
I knew there was a reason I liked you, other than the slash. You geek *hugs you*
He had a funny feeling about this deal and he wanted to be back topside, monitoring what was going on at the meeting. Spike's contact was a Chaddock and he didn't trust the slimy bastards.
I use that as an example of the AWESOME 'verse and backstory you've created. This whole thing is amazing--how do you do it? Who do you read in sci-fi? Williams? Gibson? And if you don't mind the comparison--this is how Firefly shoulda been. Complex-er, cooler and more kickass backstory stuff. They had the interesting characters and the beginnings of something good, but you've got those and everything else--right off the bat, as well.
Yes, I am hooked.
I want this to be a tv show right now--and a series of novels. And some graphic novels! YEAH!
This is perfect and you must write it forever or else *shakes fist at you*