It's always fun to get more of this! Now I need to go back and read it from the start . . . maybe you don't have conflict, per se, but I do remember tension and uncertainty and . . . even though they seem to be moving together at this moment, the nervous sort of dance they've been doing seems very real to me. (Or is there a bit of insanity when one describes anything involving a vampire as "real"?)
I also agree with julia_here's assessment of William/Spike vs. Liam/Angel.
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I also agree with julia_here's assessment of William/Spike vs. Liam/Angel.